Saturday, July 23, 2005

Meriweather complete

You'll be pleased to know that I finished "For Meriweather" this morning. Check it out and tell me what you think. It was hard to decide on how to end it. I didn't want to be too obvious or too trite. Other possible endings could include:

1. She discovers he doesn't have a real package, but a pair of neuticals instead.
2. He's a she-male.
3. It's a set-up! He's a undercover cop trained to ferret out genital-grabbing freaks like her!

2 comments:

Ken said...

Polypro...neutiwha...??? My God, and to think poor Vigo(my friend's standard schnauzer) will be missing his maleberries when he could truley be packing peanuts instead...
Wait a minute-does this have anything to do with the picture in the next post?????

Anonymous said...

I think you chose the best ending. Well done!

But I have to thank you for the addition of the word "neuticals" to my vocabulary. I know someone who has a neutical, but he just refers to it as the "rubber ball."